That comic AS draws with all the animu girls in it.

[Mario500]

I like the artwork of the cartoons posted, I just don't like the use of the speech enhancers or rough language used by the characters. They may add realism, but some folks don't want to be reminded of those parts of the real world while viewing a work of fiction. Speech enhancers are more distracting than entertaining.

[Dux is not you]

Because the rest of the strip isn't already out-of-this-world insane.

[X-3]

Yeah, this comic is fine until bad language pops up. It is then my mind is shot back into the twisted reality of the society we live in, where corruption, bigotry, violence and sexual deviation are considered ordinary. Then, the harshest truth hits me: I will never have a Shy Guy teacher beat me up while calling me a piece of ****.

[Antisocial]

Sometimes the swear is part of the joke.

^^^ That is a good point, but it's already kind of too late to stop now and have characters uncharacteristically swear off swearing. If it makes you feel any better, I have a lot of characters who choose not to swear at all.

One of them's in this old comic.


His house: Fukuda "Bomb" Rikuu
His loss: Shoemi Tsuboshin

[DarkZero]

Yeah, this comic is fine until bad language pops up. It is then my mind is shot back into the twisted reality of the society we live in, where corruption, bigotry, violence and sexual deviation are considered ordinary. Then, the harshest truth hits me: I will never have a Shy Guy teacher beat me up while calling me a piece of ****.

I tend to agree. Swearing doesn't really add anything and it can actually take away from a joke. Exception: above comic.

Also, your list of the qualities of a twisted society almost feels like this to me, since sexual deviation isn't really caused by ignorance or general asshattery. But I get what you mean.

[LOOT]

Now now, just because YOU guys are afraid to read this comic around your mothers doesn't mean the swearing detracts.

I, for one, enjoy the clash of realistic dialogue and situations combined with strange features of Mario elements and a Celebi coach.

[Greenmarioman]

keep them cursing, it doesnt ruin ****

no pun intended

[United Nations]

I like the swearing. It reminds me of normal conversations with my friends. I just skip over the swear words because it's typical. I say, keep it up.

[Antisocial]

Could you tell from the pixels?

The people have spoken, I guess.

Sorry, Mario500. It started profane, so I gotta keep the tradition going. It keeps the comic SO EDGY AND HARDCORE. Because y'know, swearing always does that.

Although, there's none in this comic I drew two days ago.


Giver: Shoemi Tsuboshin
Born August 2nd: Cream Shitaba
Inspector: Yamagura

[LOOT]

Gotta give him credit. He didn't pull any shenanigans. Evil shenanigans.

[Dux is not you]

Unless I missed the joke, it's not funnay.

Also, is there something wrong with Yamagura's left eye?

[Valigarmander]

Also, is there something wrong with Yamagura's left eye?

Someone's gonna ask this every time she appears.

[DarkZero]

^^Always has been.

In fact, someone once got her to wear a 'derp' shirt.

[Dux is not you]

Wait, he's a she?

Not like that explains anything.

[DarkZero]

You really should read the back issues.

[Dux is not you]

Thanks for the suggestion, though.

[Antisocial]

At least her speed increased.

Also, is there something wrong with Yamagura's left eye?

No. There's something wrong with both her eyes.

By the way, it's not necessary to let me know when the comic isn't funny. I am already aware it generally isn't.


Aide: Question
Coach: Misanthropy
About to shrink: Itsuki Penn
Intended target: Eli Brimmer
Background people: Aya Iyama, Zash Tekku, Asago Tokohoma

[Apiary Tazy]

Always be afraid when it comes to Misanthrophy's forms of "motivation"

[Dux is not you]

Actually, it generally is. That's why I believe it necessary to point out when it's not.

[LOOT]

That's why I believe it necessary to point out when it's not.

Just stop