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Post by Antisocial » Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:48 pm

Fillers: Day 3

[7/23/2011 EDIT: There's no filler here anymore. Move on. Besides, I'm pretty sure you came to this thread to read comics. Those are below.]

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#162

Post by Fairlight Excalibur » Thu Sep 30, 2010 4:07 pm

I was surprised that Bomb was not present in the Valentine picture.

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Post by Zaden » Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:31 pm

You know those gay test motivational fakes? I totally didn't see Misanthropy until you pointed out that he was in there.

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#164

Post by Deepfake » Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:43 am

Coloring discussion, etc.

Your cousin's colors might not be accurate, but they're very nice. Softer colors and lines makes it a bit easier on the eyes, and the yellow for the hair is a bit richer. Philanthropy's palette is really slick, the other two don't have that nice combination with the colors. If you want some tips about how to work your colors in private, I'll be happy to talk about my own ideas on technique and how they might apply. As far as your cuz's colors go, I dig them well enough except for the flat greys and the brown leaning a little too far toward green. A richer, reddish tone would've been nice.

As a rule about the grey in print, it's usually better to use a faded color tone. Grey in commercial print is accomplished through fine dithering, and the finer it gets the more expensive it gets, and you never get that nice solid look that the colors will have. Using subtle colors will also give you a wider range of highlights, as well. Just like IRL, everything reflects ambient light, so it's rare that you ever see greytones as a perfectly balanced neutral.

Of course, it's not like you're not allowed to like your lines, bro. Good luck getting anyone to consider publishing it, though. If you'd practice giving it some polish, you might get the experience necessary to really see what kind of sketchiness you can get away with.

If you want to get the door open to the publishing industry, I'd suggest starting a more traditional piece with that slick polished look everyone expects, and trying to get your foot in the door. You can certainly hold onto your pet project and get it published later on, which is all the more appealing if you've got your history of concepts to re-work. If you'd rather keep it sketchy and loose, I'd suggest avoiding the whole publishing market altogether, though. Start a webcomic series, and if you make some money elsewhere, in advertising, or through mechandise you can use that to do limited runs of your stuff in print. No publisher necessary. :3

Oh, and try to plan ahead if you want to color a piece. It looks a bit awkward if you're doing line shading and need to color it afterwards (although it's easier if you're willing to use composite layers). I found that out the hard way, that I would want to touch up shading with the comp afterwards and naturally the kind of shading you do with the comp isn't the kind you do with a pencil.
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#165

Post by DarkZero » Fri Oct 01, 2010 3:15 pm

I'm not sure how common a name Luizi actually is, but it sounds completely made-up.
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Post by Antisocial » Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:59 pm

CRINKLE

^^ Thanks muchly for the advice. Hopefully it'll be of help in the Photoshop class I'm currently taking. Next time I do a colored piece, maybe I'll see if I can drop you a line and glean from your techniques.

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Post by Kargath » Sat Oct 02, 2010 2:46 pm

The colouring is a big improvement! moooorrreeee
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Post by Antisocial » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:23 pm

I doubt there was such an episode in real life.

^ Thanks. I've pretty much posted all my good colored pieces on VGF already, so you're gonna have to wait.

HotD's still not back from her vacation yet, so here's another old comic.

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Post by Antisocial » Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:39 pm

The Radical Squadron comes through yet again.

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Post by CaptHayfever » Tue Oct 05, 2010 1:27 am

Hey, he cheered her up; I'd call that a success.

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"

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Post by Antisocial » Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:18 pm

No one respects the yellow.

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Post by United Nations » Tue Oct 05, 2010 9:45 pm

Everyone knows yellow means look around for cops then put the pedal to the floor. haha.

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Post by DarkZero » Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:02 pm

Shye Gai?

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Why did I just notice this now?
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Post by CaptHayfever » Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:16 pm

It actually just means "Caution". If you're sufficiently close to the light, you're supposed to maintain speed & go through it rather than cause an accident by stopping too abruptly.

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Post by Antisocial » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:09 pm

It makes me sad that the shirt on the left actually exists.

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Post by Kargath » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:20 pm

CaptHayfever wrote:It actually just means "Caution". If you're sufficiently close to the light, you're supposed to maintain speed & go through it rather than cause an accident by stopping too abruptly.

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"
Not here - the meaning is "slow down and stop unless it is not safe to do so"
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#177

Post by Fairlight Excalibur » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:47 pm

^Exact same result as Capt's definition, regardless of wording.

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Post by Rainbow Dash » Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:41 pm

heh heh, she owned him

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Post by Antisocial » Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:24 pm

I can't decide who's the stupider one here.

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#180

Post by Greenmarioman » Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:44 pm

Who's that in the background of the second panel?

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