Trying to be funny again.

[LOOT]

S-s-stupid chocolate. It's not l-like I LIKE you or anything!

[Antisocial]

Drawing water sucks.


Went too far: Xingo Taromujo
Escalation victim: Zash Tekku

[Deepfake]

The greytone is providing a big improvement in your contrast, man. And that word bubble with the bold outline, gradient, and the computer text is pretty tasty.

Despite what a pain it is, you're doing a decent job with the water. The context of the water fight is obvious to show what you intended. If you want it to be graphically resonant as water, the best I could suggest is you darken the water's background to a greytone where possible, and make the the water a lighter shade with white highlights. Obviously, you haven't given yourself a lot of space in the background where that's feasible, but lightening up the water is usually more effective than relying on blue. Rushed artists always go for the white on blue thing so they don't have to make it look like water, since it is now one of those strange cultural implications thanks to repeating media.

Also, I like Xingo's hair a lot more in the last 3 panels. Stick with the shiny white on that particular dark grey, even if that's supposed to be wet hair in this, that looks bomb!

[CaptHayfever]

^^Anyone besides me seen UHF?

^No, this looks Bomb.

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"

[Rainbow Dash]

^^Anyone besides me seen UHF?

yes but zash didnt find the marble

[DarkZero]

I think you did this joke already.

[Antisocial]

A perpetual drafter is me.

^^^^ Computer text, you say? That's my handwriting. Either I'm misinterpreting something or I HAD YOU FOOLED BIG TIME. Also, too many anime artists already give all their characters an unnatural luster in their hair akin to those goddamn shampoo commercials. It's disgusting. [strike]I am not also justifying laziness on my part at all.[/strike]

^^^ DOHOHOHOHOHOHO

^ Same gag. Different punchline. People don't utilize water for slapstick often enough.


Sketchy: Tobei Rikuu
Smooth: Finis Rikuu

[Deepfake]

^^^^ Computer text, you say? That's my handwriting. Either I'm misinterpreting something or I HAD YOU FOOLED BIG TIME. Also, too many anime artists already give all their characters an unnatural luster in their hair akin to those goddamn shampoo commercials. It's disgusting. [strike]I am not also justifying laziness on my part at all.[/strike]

Ah, no I meant you wrote it with the tablet, because it's bold with an unvarying tone, and has a particularly wide stroke. The contrast and space distribution in the few word bubbles was great. It really helps the reader find the text effortlessly, because it sets it out from the rest of the image.

[DarkZero]

It's funny because I can relate.

[Antisocial]

Do you really need a reason?


Lost everything: Ivy Synthet, Asago Tokohoma

[Auron]

Is it bad that I've seen so many creeper references lately that even though I've never played the game, I know exactly what's going on here?

[Deepfake]

man, creepers are great

[Valigarmander]

^^ Ditto.

[Rainbow Dash]

r i p

[Jailbreaker]

The problem is that applying creepers is like applying memes. It doesn't automatically make something funny.

[Apiary Tazy]

Nice one AS.

[Jere]

No but it's more contemporary than a lit stick of dynamite

[LOOT]

The problem is that applying creepers is like applying memes. It doesn't automatically make something funny.

We're sorry you haven't played Minecraft before and haven't been traumatized by Creepers wrecking your mine track I MEAN COME ON IT WAS STARTING TO GET GOOD

:crazy:

[Antisocial]

The logical conclusion.

Is it bad that I've seen so many creeper references lately that even though I've never played the game, I know exactly what's going on here?

Nope.

^^^^ Yeah, I'm aware of that. I was shooting for less funny and more "hay guyz i made a minecraft reference am i cool yet".


Loser: Hinigata To
Winner: Kel Norbison
Ombudsman: Deadpool

[LOOT]

You forgot to have Deadpool smack Hinigata with his yellow text box!

TAUNT BUTTON!