Trying to be funny again.

[Rainbow Dash]

oh woops read that as with an a instead of an e, carry on i guess

[Antisocial]

LET'S FIGHTING TIME


Critic: Hinigata To
Extremely bored: Kel Norbison, Sensa "Nabooru" Katae

[LOOT]

Guest starring Dr. Ashen!

[Rainbow Dash]

is nabooru computer inked

[chibimod3]

Heh Heh Pop station.

[DarkZero]

Kel's hair is like that too, and the divider line's are clearly made with some type of image program.

[Deepfake]

The PS panelization of the comic is a huge improvement. Consider doing your text in print as well? It would be nice to be able to read it a bit easier. I'd suggest using multiple word bubbles to break up paragraphs, too, since it can give you a lot more freedom with the format of the image and make the text less daunting to initiates.

I have no idea what the last one's about, btw. Just thought I'd mention that. Clone system, or something?

[Antisocial]

holy **** a talking hot water handle

^^^^, ^^ All right, you caught me. I drew that one on the computer, as well as the one below. Yeah, I sometimes do comics with my tablet.

^ Thanks for the advice and for pointing out alleged improvement. I think I'll stick to writing the words, as I feel perfectly rendered text will clash with all the hand-drawn stuff. Also, I've done it this way for so long to a point deviating just feels wrong. If legibility is a problem, I can always write bigger. Besides, I enjoy writing.

By the way, the console business refers to this.


Wiped out: Itsuki Penn
Flood prevention: Tsu-xia Tenor
Informant: What Langston

[CaptHayfever]

WALL used HYDRO CANNON! Critical hit!

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"

[DarkZero]

When I saw the shower head in the third panel, the first thing it made me think of was 'IMMA FIRING MAH WATER'.

[Deepfake]

Oh yeah, feel free to hand-write it or whatever you prefer, as long as you can improve the legibility. Bubble placement and text size are one of those great challenges of actually figuring out how the hell to do a comic that people don't usually talk about, there's not exactly a right way to do it.

I try to be less verbose and ride on the effectiveness of the images, myself, but I bet you'll just roll your eyes if I mention reducing your word-count. ;)

How do you like the tablet, btw?

[Antisocial]

Page-stretcher? Not likely.

^ The tablet's going wonderfully. Obviously gives me a lot more to work with than just a pencil and paper, especially when paired with the nifty art program I recently got. Now I can compose stupid **** like this:



PRETTY COLORS

[LOOT]

HOLY CRAP

is that what AS really looks like i bet it is

[Rainbow Dash]

its true shoemi is AS's self-insert

[Auron]

So that's what AS draws in his spare time.

[chibimod3]

Is that sai?

[Antisocial]

Oh, look. Impossible trajectory.

^ Yep.

^^ YES DON'T JUDGE ME

its true shoemi is AS's self-insert

Heeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllllllllllllll no.


Been busy with Valentine's stuff. Still doing other stuff on the side, though.


Collaterally damaged from mug casualty: Yamagura
Shirt's too small: Emily Yurimitsu

[United Nations]

The first two panels remind me of Jon from "Garfield." haha.

[Antisocial]

Yeah, change line thickness in the middle of the comic. No one will notice.


Kind stock character: Mirasu Fugu
Mean stock character: Nidesu Fugu
Recipient: Shoemi Tsuboshin
Observer: Fourscythe Kabesou

[CaptHayfever]

Man, it's a good thing he likes the chocolate; elsewise those two would probably both kill him.

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"